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Well…. not perfect, but less like zombies than a good number of other paintings from the recent past. The question remains….. do i attempt to ‘fix’ the lady in the dress so she’s not slouching? Or do you like the uncertainty of her stance? and does her dress need straps?
Wait, is there a person in the first painting?
hey you ~shakes fist~ there are clearly two legs in the upper left-hand corner ;-P
No “fixing” of the lady! I love that she’s slouching and that you can actually see that in your painting. I think straps would distract from this. The fact that she’s slouching makes it seem sort of like a candid photo, like you caught something she was doing when she didn’t think you were looking. It seems much less portrait-like this way, which I think is far more interesting to look at.